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    dots Submission Name: Divinedots
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    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1022
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 777



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       My husband made a song out of this poem. It's pretty good.


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    dotsDivinedots
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    Our heart is a river that
    flows north to the divine
    this damn will break if given
    too much time

    I have no reason why
    but thatís ok
    I live for tomorrow and not
    for today

    our thoughts maybe on overload but our soul is searching for
    the flood

    storing too much knowledge can
    break a mind
    so just hold on tight itís
    only time

    my space here is about done
    but my faith has just begun

    I have no reason why
    but thatís ok
    I live for tomorrow
    and not for today

    my heart is a river that
    flows north to the divine
    this damn will one day
    break free for it's only time




    Submitted on 2005-01-30 21:34:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      liked its flow a lot. tom
    | Posted on 2011-01-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a terrific write and I bet it does sound beautiful with music to go along with those well written lines. I do so enjoy your work too, keep up the good writing. will read more of yours

    Ladymustang
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by LadyMustang | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good piece, gives us insight to keep moving on and not to look back of the past nor to dwell only for today... but to live for tomorrow.. nice, a good eye opener to those who are feeling a bit discouraged... write more!
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by chatters | [ Reply to This ]


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