Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Divinedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: lynn7
    ASL Info:    43/ St. Augustine, FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 419/288/103
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 966
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 777



    Description:
       My husband made a song out of this poem. It's pretty good.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsDivinedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Our heart is a river that
    flows north to the divine
    this damn will break if given
    too much time

    I have no reason why
    but thatís ok
    I live for tomorrow and not
    for today

    our thoughts maybe on overload but our soul is searching for
    the flood

    storing too much knowledge can
    break a mind
    so just hold on tight itís
    only time

    my space here is about done
    but my faith has just begun

    I have no reason why
    but thatís ok
    I live for tomorrow
    and not for today

    my heart is a river that
    flows north to the divine
    this damn will one day
    break free for it's only time




    Submitted on 2005-01-30 21:34:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      liked its flow a lot. tom
    | Posted on 2011-01-09 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a terrific write and I bet it does sound beautiful with music to go along with those well written lines. I do so enjoy your work too, keep up the good writing. will read more of yours

    Ladymustang
    | Posted on 2005-11-03 00:00:00 | by LadyMustang | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good piece, gives us insight to keep moving on and not to look back of the past nor to dwell only for today... but to live for tomorrow.. nice, a good eye opener to those who are feeling a bit discouraged... write more!
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by chatters | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    44608

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Johnny's Cock written by endlessgame23
    The Human Harmonic written by Daniel Barlow
    A Thousand Reflections written by endlessgame23
    The Want written by Daniel Barlow
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Meaningless Meanings written by ForgottenGraves
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Lie back & tan written by Daniel Barlow
    Night- time written by Daniel Barlow
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    The Abyss of Love written by poetotoe
    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    going,,,"Skin." written by teika5
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    Snippet written by Daniel Barlow
    Not the Devil, but the Wind written by endlessgame23
    Gaia written by endlessgame23
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Sword in the Water written by Wolfwatching
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Verse: written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry