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    dots Submission Name: Torn Soulsdots
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    Author: EmptyPromise_5
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 20/25/9
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 787
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 431



    Description:
       Ahhhhhhhh... Another one of my demented modes. I wrote it for a friend on her birthday,
    she writes demented poetry too... don't we all?


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    dotsTorn Soulsdots
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    Every heart has it's hole
    where soul comes trickling out
    it may take days
    months
    years
    a lifetime
    to heal that wound and be at peace
    i've been ripped and torn
    soul seeping out
    now i sit here
    a hint of a soul clinging to an empty shell
    I can only heal myself
    they say
    but who will wake me
    from this never ending nightmare?




    Submitted on 2005-01-31 02:01:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice write i think our soul is more than our heart love comes from the soul not from the heart if you have a pacemaker what your saying is then you lost your soul as well hmmm very interesting good write
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-01-31 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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