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    dots Submission Name: Screamdots
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    Author: sweet-fire
    ASL Info:    21/f/ky
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 296/279/42
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 324
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    Description:
       anyone ever had a parent or been with someone that screamed at you all the time and so much that you thought your head would explode? this is how i feel...just wrote it so its not written to well but i thought i would share and make sure im not just going crazy...


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    dotsScreamdots
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    scream and scream until my head explodes...

    cant take anymore of your stupid lies.
    tired of you and all your pathetic cries.
    i hate you and i hope its you who dies!

    scream and scream until my head explodes...

    take my life and try to control me to.
    your my burden and ive had enough of you.
    bring me down-thats what you want to do.

    scream and scream until my head explodes...

    take it back, everything you've done to me.
    take it back, or my hate i will let you see.
    do it now or a killer is what ill be.

    to late-head exploded...




    Submitted on 2005-01-31 08:22:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      O_O Wow. First, off I think some of the best poems are just writen out in the heat of the moment or what ever. Second, I like this one verry much espechailly the last line. Great job.
    | Posted on 2005-02-15 00:00:00 | by Rail | [ Reply to This ]
      hmm...angry...what happened? What made you want to write this? Steven again? And your journal enrty...I CARE! *sighs* oh well, talk to me if you want, you dont have to...but just know that I care, ok?

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    | Posted on 2005-01-31 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very mixed emotions. At least thats what I see. It seems like you try to fight the person you hate as well as yourself at the same time. What a horrible situation that must be. Though sad I enjoyed the symbolic meaning at the end and I just wanted to sat sorry i havent commented on more of your writing .Life gets busy sometimes. Oh well, well hit me up some time and comment on my new poem I would really appreciate it. Your freind Medieval Aztec
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by Medieval Aztec | [ Reply to This ]



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