You act so warm to every one else
But all I feel from you is coldness
Where is the love
Where is the hate
Where is the joy
Where is the anger
All I want is something, something besides this numbing coldness
How can nothing hurt so much
I really like this poem. I think it shows alot of emotion. I really like that your not beating around the bush and you get strait to the point. Personally I really like the line- How can nothing hurt so much I think that line brings alot of punch and expresses the point of the whole poem.
hey this one is good too im gonna read all yer stuff! lol. this makes me fell like meby i should stop being so cold i wonder if ppl think im weird... mheracai
I like how you can express so much emotion with so few words. But the ending seems to be missing something. I think you may want to add another line before the last line. Overall great poem.
Submission Name: Coldness
