Description: i'm in a fairly good mood...just watched a cradle of filth video i've been downloading for 3 days...was kick ass. so just to lighten things up, here it is:
Human Figure Scorned -------------------------------------------
Peter liked to be nude
But his neighbors found it rude
So he put on his shirt
Said "I feel hurt"
And sat down for hours to brood
p.s.:i know it sucks...suggestions are more than welcome
Funny, I didn't really think I could add an intelligent comment to this. Just saw that it only had two comments and thought it should have at least one more. Forgive me for passing through and leaving nothing but crap. You left so many good comments on my stuff that it embarrassed me. I felt obligated to at least try to reciprocate. Now, that I've revealed myself as the truest of phonies I think I'll just crawl back in my cave and pretend this didn't happen. The other comments I left are for real, really. I mean that. ~Stephen
I thought this was hilarious. It was so simple that it was kinda stupid, but people like stupid stuff. I definitely like stupid stuff. I wouldn't change anything. It was a cute little story, good for a laugh. Melissa PS: A tip from someone who reads a lot of poetry on this site: Dont knock your own stuff. Leave the judgement up to the readers; if you say you hate your piece, it makes others more likely to hate it.
i love limericks! you see so few on here, it is good to see one so well formed and done. why no title for it? i liked the way it read- the first two lines fell in step easily with the second three. i thought it was extremely funny and it made me laugh out loud. the piece was very cool and i liked it a lot. -Q
Submission Name: Human Figure Scorned
