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Author: darkness
ASL Info:    19/F/my own world
Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524 /218 /40
Words: 19
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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some of the innocent are ignorent
their idle minds like zombies
following their leader
a vampire with his minions

Submitted on 2005-01-31 17:30:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  kool aaki you are so intense dude kool
well i get for one thing and it remindes me of dragular dig through the ditches and burn and through the back of my dragular this rocks
| Posted on 2006-01-13 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
Dude you have to quit your freakingly freakish obsession with zombies.
I LUBBB THIS POEM. It's very muchhh good :)))
| Posted on 2005-02-01 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]

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