zombies

Author: darkness ASL Info:    19/F/my own world Elite Ratio:    1.84 - 524 /218 /40 Words: 19

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zombies

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some of the innocent are ignorent their idle minds like zombies following their leader a vampire with his minions

Submitted on 2005-01-31 17:30:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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kool aaki you are so intense dude kool well i get for one thing and it remindes me of dragular dig through the ditches and burn and through the back of my dragular this rocks

| Posted on 2006-01-13 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]

HAHAHAHAHA WOOOOOOOOO. Dude you have to quit your freakingly freakish obsession with zombies. I LUBBB THIS POEM. It's very muchhh good :)))

| Posted on 2005-02-01 00:00:00 | by GiveMeTheGun | [ Reply to This ]

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