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Submission Name: In the dark dots

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Author:	steph1011
Elite Ratio:	2.42 - 34/45/25
Words:	59

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	274
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	370

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In the dark dots

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In the dark
all your fears
come into play
they become reality.

It seems like a lie
But if stands as the truth
in the dark you find out
all you fears never end.

They stay with you
and haunt you
everyday and night
you lye awake,
wishing it will be over.

Submitted on 2005-01-31 18:41:56 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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This is a good poem...but it seems like something is missing. I'm not sure what it is...I think you needsomething more before the last stanza. But it is pretty good...it just needs a little work. nice write!
| Posted on 2005-01-31 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]

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