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    dots Submission Name: In the darkdots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsIn the darkdots
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    In the dark
    all your fears
    come into play
    they become reality.

    It seems like a lie
    But if stands as the truth
    in the dark you find out
    all you fears never end.

    They stay with you
    and haunt you
    everyday and night
    you lye awake,
    wishing it will be over.





    Submitted on 2005-01-31 18:41:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a good poem...but it seems like something is missing. I'm not sure what it is...I think you needsomething more before the last stanza. But it is pretty good...it just needs a little work. nice write!
    | Posted on 2005-01-31 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]



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