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    dots Submission Name: In a Worlddots

    Author: LLRDD
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 28/42/19
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       my friend and i wrote this...

    she posted it too but under a different name so if you feel you have read it before that is why....

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    dotsIn a Worlddots

    The shadows will not be cast upon me, I will not be lost.
    In a world of hatred, I pray you find me unique
    I ask to stand out amongst the rest.
    I hope you find me in love.

    In a world of hate, a single flower can make a difference

    A dying rose casts a shadow
    A cloud over my love and taints
    Chemicals burn thourgh velvet hearts
    and once again
    A single flower can make a difference.
    Petals crushed under footsteps to fast
    I found you in the meadow
    The broadest, the sweetest, the Last
    In love a pain sticks through my chest
    This time I lie dow in the FLowers and died
    Betrayed thoughts put to rest.

    Submitted on 2005-01-31 23:15:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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