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    dots Submission Name: Self Hatedots
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    Author: DontSaveMySoul
    ASL Info:    20/m/cali
    Elite Ratio:    3.84 - 194/184/42
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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       was really depressed when this was originally writen


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    dotsSelf Hatedots
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    Left begging for the end
    I am hewn and hemmed
    Left for waste of flesh
    Carrion for foul wraiths
    Feeding soil my phosphorous
    A victim of my cruel devices
    Nhilism turned inward
    Smiten by none other than myself
    I lay in persistant wait
    Not for an inept prey
    But for my fatal strike
    When I finally set myself free




    Submitted on 2005-02-02 00:30:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, you take this self Godhood thing all the way. Most people would seek out pity when things don't go well. Here, you're staying true to your conviction and determined to take the blame and be the source of your own rescue. You just don't miss a beat. Rock on.
    | Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by Spare Change | [ Reply to This ]
      hey i enjoyed reading this poem, it was very well rounded, i hope to read more like it, i really enjoy reading ur writeing keep it up
    | Posted on 2005-02-02 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice write. You have an interesting style that i've noticed in your other wriitngs, i dont' think i've seen many if any others. You use a very broad vocubualry, use of big words or words very few use or will ever hear in a lifetime. While i love your style, personally, it always seems as if you are trying to confuse your read and truly make them think, make them want to run for a dictionary so they understand every detail of your work. I commend you for such briliance. Again, very good piece, i hope to read more of yours soon.
    | Posted on 2005-02-02 00:00:00 | by Mercy December | [ Reply to This ]



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