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    Author: dublhelix
    ASL Info:    18/m/perth australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 43/36/15
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 243
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       love poem....theres cameos from famous poets and playwrights in there...john donne, shakespeare....marlowe...


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    "she likes me? how i long
    to hear, in subtext, on the edge of my ear..
    those three words said...and expression of choice....
    for, like choice of bassilo,
    theres suitors plenty, and I but bronze,
    gold and silver have way to fine a sheen
    for my ego to consider my place to be there....
    like in play, in life....please i plead,
    be my coliepe...my titania in the woods,
    my (too often used in poems past,
    to give sense of place, or depth of feeling)
    juliet...fated lovers, we shall not see out our place,
    nor go gentle into that night,
    but, humours balanced fine, shall live forever...





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      I loved this. It was amazingly written, and it makes me think that you are an itellectual giant. Great job, and I really liked how you put some of shakespeares work in here. It shows that you appreciate one of the greatest writers in history. Great work!
    Alyssa
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ]
      Well i didn't think john donne and shakespeare were a combatible combination but i think you have done that quite well. i liked the line 'i long to hear in subtext on the edge of my ear'. i found the poem a little distant though and I didn't get an emotional response from itbut that's most probably from my own lack of live expereince.
    | Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Lafferty | [ Reply to This ]



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