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    dots Submission Name: cutting- pain to all...dots
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    Author: dublhelix
    ASL Info:    18/m/perth australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 43/36/15
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 227
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i have many friends who cut themselves. is it a reaction to todays society? where rejection and depression is so commonplace? this is a poem on my feelings on the subject.


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    dotscutting- pain to all...dots
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    why?
    feelings sunk, misery comes,
    depression like waves of darkness
    descend upon the soul....
    dampen emotion.
    defeat reaction.
    destroy elation.
    feeling.
    gone.

    even in these times of woe, to think...
    to cause pain, surely, is to INCREASE those fears?
    to cause the dank impression of life
    to a surrogate sense of self-defeat?


    one factor saves to see me through..
    and hopefully it'll cause to cease,
    stop through sense of overwhelming greif
    the harm you casue upon yourself.
    and others.


    hope.




    Submitted on 2005-02-03 09:46:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I also really liked this piece, although it didn't ryhme, I felt that the message was perfected to a "T" I'm sorry if you cut, because I've been through that time and time again, and it isn't good. The more I read of your work, the more I am impressed. Great job, and I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
    Alyssa
    | Posted on 2006-01-29 00:00:00 | by alcoholcaust | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this. You expressed yourself well and it is a wonderful poem. Most "cutters" were physically or sexually abused when they were younger.and it says theu didn't learn how to express themselves so they resort to self-mutilation. I think you should go online a read about it some. It's hard to talk to someone who doesn't do it about why you do it...Not all people that do it were sexually or physically abused...and I know one person that did it just for attention. I really think you should just look it up some online and maybe you could understand more. newho. I really do like this poem you did a nice job!
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by MyKemicalfailur | [ Reply to This ]



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