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    dots Submission Name: Let's Give'em A Monthdots
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    Author: poetryman
    ASL Info:    47, male...phila
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 447/468/72
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Poetry/Political
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    dotsLet's Give'em A Monthdots
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    Let's Give Them A Month

    let's give them a month
    to celebrate their culture
    that's all we need to do
    to cover up the vulture
    that ate their souls
    and preyed upon their dignity
    raped and enslaved them
    only to declare they were free

    granted we need to do something
    for we fumbled the King thing
    so fuck it, give'em a month
    to talk of "let freedom ring"
    it's such a small price to pay
    to apologize as a nation
    for the atrocities committed
    through oppression and degredation

    it will have to be unamimous
    or we'll look like complete fools
    it'll be hard getting the south
    where johnny rebel still rules
    ah damn what shall we propose to trade
    how bout inner city educational cuts
    yeah, they'll go for that
    no ifs, ands, or buts

    so it's settled then
    we shall pay homage
    by giving them a month
    to soothe their rage
    redirect their focus
    and hatred towards us
    excellent, let's do it
    let's get everyone on the bus

    Bob Shank Feb. 2nd 2005
    I can only imagine the conversation
    that occurred in congress concerning
    the bill to pass "black history month"
    but this is what I imagined.....
    Dedicated to those who have suffered the atrocities of mankind, to "ALL" those who truly were not treated as they were created equal......





    Submitted on 2005-02-03 13:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree with you so much. I live in the the south. *Kentucky* So it's a bunch of hick people who don't really understand that we do need to pay them respect for at least one month. The shortest month for that matter! Oh well. This was a good write. It's good to see you posting again. As always you writes get me thinking and striving to be a better person. :) Thanks so much!
    -blt
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by borderlinetears | [ Reply to This ]
      that was quite a brilliant and incisive piece of writing.at first i thought that it might have been about the recent iraqi election but i got to the bottom of it and i wonder if there wasn't some cynicism about the situation that you were writing about.it will certainly be a topic of great debate and what more could possibly have been done at this point?good luck and fare well.
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by sickly | [ Reply to This ]



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