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    dots Submission Name: Bastards and Bitchesdots
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    Author: Kera
    ASL Info:    18-f-NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 116/129/29
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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       lol I dont know what this is I think I wrote it when I was hihg...lol good for bein high dont you think?


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    I will make you scream
    you bitch

    dont want to know what
    you do not wish to share

    You hide form me,
    and i will do the same

    I am a child in this game
    but it works for me

    Bleed you Bastards
    Sream you Bitches

    No one will see
    No one will hear.




    Submitted on 2005-02-03 15:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow so much anger but very real and powerful. i'm only but a year older than you but you are a fantastic writer. f*ck age girl...you can write. all the raw emotion is what makes it a good read!
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by secretdream0 | [ Reply to This ]
      Eminem- what the fu<k are people talking about. More ICP than that. Anyway- Hi! Yes- grood for being high. I lyke it just plain in general! So- yeah! Peace, love and fun-tyme pills-~#6-
    | Posted on 2005-02-04 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      You're like a female Eminem, which may or may not be a good thing. I'd like to see some more of the poetic side of you - and make it fit just like Em does. Take some anger management, girlfriend!
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by Lady Tragedy | [ Reply to This ]
      typo on the third line first sentence. Should be from. You probably would have caught it if you hadn't written this while you were high. I am not really a fan of teen angst poetry. It kind of seems a little immature, but if that is what you are feeling, Fu$k what I have to say and rage on girl.
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by solararia | [ Reply to This ]
      ooh...angry I see...i like it alot because of the anger shown though.

    Bleed you [censored]s
    Sream you Bitches

    No one will see
    No one will hear.

    my fave part:) If only it werent illegal to kill...there would be a lot less stupid ppl in the world today, lol...

    ->Dark
    | Posted on 2005-02-27 00:00:00 | by drk_angl_17 | [ Reply to This ]
      nice write for a flyer...wouldnt want to meet you when your pissed in a dark alley at night time! love the feel of your anger in this...
    very good read

    Rhaine
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by Rhaine | [ Reply to This ]


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