I think I'll draw a picture.
A picture with a twist.
I'll draw it with a razorblade.
I'll draw it on my wrist.
As I begin to draw a fountain will appear.
And as this fountain flows,
My worries will disappear.
when i usually read short poems like this one they never seem to have much detail and depth that makes the reader feel intent on reading it, yours however was very fitting and i felt like i could see and feel what you were trying to explain, i was totally against cutting as my friend did it, but when i started i felt i couldn't stop, i was addicted as you could say, it took everything away and make me feel better. anywayz this was a really nice piece i hope to read more of your work. ++My Pain++
i always find myself turning to self-mutilation. i used to think it was weird cause i didnt understand it. now i even wonder why more people dont do it...it helps.
Ne ways, i love that poem & i feel the same way. the way it rhymes was perfect, & when i read it, i felt like...it described me perfectly. i love stuff that i can relate to, i guess its because i understand it and it just means more to me. Youre really talented.