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    dots Submission Name: Picturedots
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    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 1011
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    Bytes: 265



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       Just write how you feel when you read it. Did you ever feel so low that you resorted to self mutilation. i used to be against it til i tried it, were you ike that?


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    I think I'll draw a picture.
    A picture with a twist.
    I'll draw it with a razorblade.
    I'll draw it on my wrist.
    As I begin to draw a fountain will appear.
    And as this fountain flows,
    My worries will disappear.




    Submitted on 2005-02-03 20:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      when i usually read short poems like this one they never seem to have much detail and depth that makes the reader feel intent on reading it, yours however was very fitting and i felt like i could see and feel what you were trying to explain, i was totally against cutting as my friend did it, but when i started i felt i couldn't stop, i was addicted as you could say, it took everything away and make me feel better. anywayz this was a really nice piece i hope to read more of your work.
    ++My Pain++
    | Posted on 2005-11-29 00:00:00 | by my pain | [ Reply to This ]
      Intense. There are a lot of poems about cutting but this is one of the best I've read. You pack so much into a few lines. Its just really deep.
    | Posted on 2005-02-04 00:00:00 | by Rail | [ Reply to This ]
      It was abit short, but it was, well as sordid as it sounds, it made me laugh, just the way you wrote it. I liked it , it rhymed in a good way.
    | Posted on 2005-02-03 00:00:00 | by Karios | [ Reply to This ]
      i always find myself turning to self-mutilation. i used to think it was weird cause i didnt understand it. now i even wonder why more people dont do it...it helps.

    Ne ways, i love that poem & i feel the same way. the way it rhymes was perfect, & when i read it, i felt like...it described me perfectly. i love stuff that i can relate to, i guess its because i understand it and it just means more to me. Youre really talented.

    * NiKkKi *
    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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