Wooo...*fans self* ..that was hot, sweet, romantic, passionate ...all in one ...great use of words without making it sound like you had a dictionary shoved up your nose at birth ....I loved it ...good job
It's not bad, it was written well. I guess it's just not my kind of poem. IT seemed more like one of those poems you have to read in your LA class and explain it and all that. As i said, it was very well written, your use of language broad, but the thing in itself, i guess just not my style or to my liking.