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    dots Submission Name: Love Stinksdots
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    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove Stinksdots
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    love stinks
    despite what any one thinks
    poems written of love so true
    romance and heart throbbing emotions too
    poets who write about these
    need to cease
    poems that praise love are far from the truth
    they're painful like a bad tooth
    love stinks
    despite what any one thinks
    all love does is cause you pain
    cause you to question yourself and go insane
    it leaves you with a hollow feeling
    to double over til you're kneeling
    to cry yourself to sleepat night
    to ponder on what caused you to fight
    you don't understand what went wrong
    or when it urned into a bad love song
    love stinks
    despite what anyone thinks
    you replay every moment in your head
    while you lay awake in bed
    you are no longer the person you had been
    before your relationship was starting to begin
    but all good things come to an end
    despite what anyone says or what they intend
    nothing ever goes the'r way
    no matter what they say
    and yet you long for someone to hold
    to feel of the love that is told
    to feel your heart throb
    and your throat escape a sob
    but a sob of happiness
    instead of the cold harsh emptiness
    you long for someone to share things with o live a great love myth
    but a myth is all that it is
    love doesn't exist
    love stinks
    despite what any one thinks




    Submitted on 2005-02-04 19:26:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Bravo ....Love ...(phoooooooey) ...its a four letter word and should be treated accordingly !!!....When im in love id probebly go meh at this poem ...but seeing as im not ...I reserve the right to hate the thought of it ....or something *lol*
    anyhoo ....well done
    | Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] yes. hey hey. great write. very cute and entertaining. not cute as in ...bullcrap. but cute as in innocently correct. haha. i'm on the same path you're on. "love does not exist"...erp erp. it is a sad thought.
    | Posted on 2005-02-06 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]
      This is so true... Love is simply another word for pain and suffering...But it is also another word for passion and sacrifice and willingness... Love does stink... But it also rules... I have been brought up and shot down by soooo many different "loves" that i couldnt count them if I wanted to... I think that once you find the "true love" that all of your aforementioned comments on love sucking...will be immediately revoked... Yes, "love hurts...But i think it is more accurately "liking" hurts...When you are so in love with someone that you are willing to give it all up for them and they for you...THEN, I think you will really see what love is... Keep up the good work.
    .Caleb.
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by Exquisite_Death | [ Reply to This ]
      i enjoyed this poem love can be sooo good and bring so much happiness but then on the other hand love can hurt in so many ways!
    | Posted on 2005-02-04 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]


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