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Love Stinks -------------------------------------------
love stinks
despite what any one thinks
poems written of love so true
romance and heart throbbing emotions too
poets who write about these
need to cease
poems that praise love are far from the truth
they're painful like a bad tooth
love stinks
despite what any one thinks
all love does is cause you pain
cause you to question yourself and go insane
it leaves you with a hollow feeling
to double over til you're kneeling
to cry yourself to sleepat night
to ponder on what caused you to fight
you don't understand what went wrong
or when it urned into a bad love song
love stinks
despite what anyone thinks
you replay every moment in your head
while you lay awake in bed
you are no longer the person you had been
before your relationship was starting to begin
but all good things come to an end
despite what anyone says or what they intend
nothing ever goes the'r way
no matter what they say
and yet you long for someone to hold
to feel of the love that is told
to feel your heart throb
and your throat escape a sob
but a sob of happiness
instead of the cold harsh emptiness
you long for someone to share things with o live a great love myth
but a myth is all that it is
love doesn't exist
love stinks
despite what any one thinks
Bravo ....Love ...(phoooooooey) ...its a four letter word and should be treated accordingly !!!....When im in love id probebly go meh at this poem ...but seeing as im not ...I reserve the right to hate the thought of it ....or something *lol* anyhoo ....well done
[censored] yes. hey hey. great write. very cute and entertaining. not cute as in ...bullcrap. but cute as in innocently correct. haha. i'm on the same path you're on. "love does not exist"...erp erp. it is a sad thought.
This is so true... Love is simply another word for pain and suffering...But it is also another word for passion and sacrifice and willingness... Love does stink... But it also rules... I have been brought up and shot down by soooo many different "loves" that i couldnt count them if I wanted to... I think that once you find the "true love" that all of your aforementioned comments on love sucking...will be immediately revoked... Yes, "love hurts...But i think it is more accurately "liking" hurts...When you are so in love with someone that you are willing to give it all up for them and they for you...THEN, I think you will really see what love is... Keep up the good work. .Caleb.
Submission Name: Love Stinks
