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    dots Submission Name: Population Bombdots
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    Author: BenCollier
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 425/386/88
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Misc/Legend
    Total Views: 743
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 445



    Description:
       from Ben's GRRLfriend. take half the population, give them a few archetypes, and what do you get?
    P.S. i do this quickly @ liberry-1 day i'll enjoy having time to read & comment on y'alls


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    dotsPopulation Bombdots
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    A smack of bastards
    Tight as pie
    Gossip and brag
    Wrap in husks
    Crushed garlic and
    A choice heart

    A rabble of studs
    Monster blood
    Battle water
    melon thieves' wives
    Who keep them
    Bedeviled

    A pelt of elders
    slit and gut
    Four tornadic
    Mandalas
    Hmm...looks like
    Peace for breakfast




    Submitted on 2005-02-05 11:28:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool little piece! population control seems that it could be the only way to find piece. man is a self destructive creature who cares only for his own narcassictic endevours and an over abundance of such beasts leads only to corruption, termoil, discontentment and pain.
    | Posted on 2005-02-17 00:00:00 | by cainboy | [ Reply to This ]
      Umm yep yep ....Im also sitting here saying ....What the hell does this mean ...Im as deep as a puddle ..so i have no idea......ummm ...some nice parts though ....I like the ending ...
    My head hurts ..Im so lost
    Blessed Be
    | Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ]
      Darlin- I love you, but what the hell does this mean? You obviously have much more talent than I do, but here, I think you reverted to your stoner days. Guess thats why you have me so beguiled, and estatic.
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by BenCollier | [ Reply to This ]


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