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    dots Submission Name: Anyone?dots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 266
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       this is a friends. (whom wants to remain un-named.)


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    dotsAnyone?dots
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    is there anyone out there?
    to listen,
    to feel,
    to hold me from the pain.
    i need a friend.
    i dont really have one.
    not one thats true.
    well, there is one.
    i know she'll get mad,
    if i see him again.
    but my only other choice,
    is to start the razor again.
    i dont want to go back to that,
    to that kind-of life again.
    i hate covering it all up,
    but i have to, to win.
    to win, i mean have friends.
    they dont know my pain,
    they cant understand,
    they havent experienced pain.
    their lives are so perfect,
    flawess to me.
    they have money and beauty,
    more then they see.
    so, is anyone going to hold me?
    to shield my from myself?
    or is my pain to much,
    to have dealt??




    Submitted on 2005-02-05 20:46:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey,tell your friend to hang in there. People who don't want to hang out with her are not worth her time anyway! Jesus loves her,and I'm here if she needs someone to talk to.
    | Posted on 2005-02-16 00:00:00 | by Maverique | [ Reply to This ]
      erp. i know how you feel. hang in there. just keep going. you'll grow out of this mindset. life can be lonely. but being lonely makes you stronger. and when people finally realize how great and independent you are. and how loving you are, they will take you in. just wait till they're as mature as you are.
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by graffitijeans | [ Reply to This ]



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