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    dots Submission Name: Answers...dots
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    Author: Paconess1006
    ASL Info:    16/M/Charlotte, NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.11 - 99/126/46
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Depressed
    Total Views: 273
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 603



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       my friend wrote this as well.


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    many answers come to mind,
    many indeed.
    the answers to my questions,
    they questions that constantly fill my head.
    answers come in multiples,
    but only one sticks out.
    blood seems the best to deal,
    thats when the razor comes about.
    i know i shouldnt do it,
    but sometimes i seems the best.
    the way to end the questions
    and kill the horible zest.
    so the blood trickles to the floor,
    from my fresh cut wrist.
    covers all the self doubt and questions
    with a freaky twist.
    -the dark princess




    Submitted on 2005-02-05 20:54:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice poem. A little random, but I think all of us can relate to it in a way. It gives a sort of..truth of it really. I like it. The understanding is vague, yet very clear. Probably not making much sense to you, Mayo, but give your friend a thumbs up on this.
    Amy~
    | Posted on 2005-02-06 00:00:00 | by Chicool2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice poem. It speacks very clearly and you know exactly what it is about. But it seemed like the rhyming was forced. I think that not rhyming would suit this piece better. and maybe add a little more, maybe a few more feelings or more of the thoughts that go through your (or whoever this is about's) head before,while, and after the cutting happens.
    | Posted on 2005-02-05 00:00:00 | by Oli | [ Reply to This ]



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