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    dots Submission Name: Free Lovedots

    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFree Lovedots

    is it a crime to love whom ever we want
    must i go through everyday
    listening to them sneer and taunt.

    i can't help who i fall for
    i don't want to spend my time
    hiding behind a door.

    i want to show the world how much
    i love her
    i want to be able to kiss her and feel her touch

    i want to do all those things
    without being scorned upon
    i want to go out and spread my wings

    i want the world to know
    that it's ok to be different
    i just want my true self to show.

    Submitted on 2005-02-06 14:07:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i went out with someone that everyone i know hates. i loved him & im still not over him but i could never tell anyone. its just been eating away at me for months & its driving me crazy. i mean, its bad enough that i still feel that way but i cant even f***ing talk about it. THAT certainly doesnt help the healing process.

    Anyways...im gonna be a hypocrite & tell u that it would probably be better to just let it out. it might be hard at 1st but in time it'll be easier if they already know.

    It was a really good poem.

    * nikkki *
    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]

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