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    dots Submission Name: pride in work..dots
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    Author: dublhelix
    ASL Info:    18/m/perth australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.8 - 43/36/15
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 279
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 637



    Description:
       hey i havent written anythin for ages...
    i think some of my earlier stuf is better, look at that... but this is my thoughts on how people like pauline hanson get fame in todays world... (pauline hanson...australias hitler..)


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    dotspride in work..dots
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    elegence, like virtuosity, is practices reward,
    fire in speech can leave men awed....
    but is power and words enough?
    to make a mark in todays world, luck
    seems all that is needed, gold and muck
    do indeed come from the same shaft..
    sometiimes, though, the gold is discarded,
    or so it seems,
    and forced to give up their dreams,
    and muck is given voice to speak....
    as if a carver, working, puts hand to a block of teak,
    and finds to dismay mere rotten wood,
    gods experience here must tell....
    if only his work is flawed as well....





    Submitted on 2005-02-07 08:46:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this because it really is the truth with the poetic slant. Very nice. I'm trying to put this down as one as my favorites, I hope it works. I also like this because I've a member of several poetry groups and I've seen poetry win contest and be placed in the top ten while some of the best poetry was ignored.
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by Mytee | [ Reply to This ]
      I really liked this peice especially the carver imagery I thought it was a really neat way of tying in the ideas of the poem. Thankfully she is no longer a political danger but still anything that continues the reality tv trend is pretty frightening!
    | Posted on 2005-11-16 00:00:00 | by Lafferty | [ Reply to This ]



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