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Author:	dublhelix
ASL Info:	18/m/perth australia
Elite Ratio:	3.8 - 43/36/15
Words:	69

Class/Type:	Rant/Venting
Total Views:	287
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	397

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VENT!

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GOD! man im glad im an atheist. NOTHING starts more wars than religion. nothing is as...pigheaded...as a man of so-called "god".

think of this. what if the only true god is ixylpottttal, the god of snakes, worshipped by 3 pygmies in the lower amazon? the EVERYONE will go to hell, and those three will go to "heaven!" MAn i wish that was true.

Submitted on 2005-02-07 09:03:49 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  god people...why do you read THIS thing, which i think is the most pointless thing i have done, and not read my quality stuff, like my poems? GO FORTH AND COMMENT ON THEM!

oh and randikae? it sys "comments prefered.." and i put "bash this".

i WANT you to bash it. go ahead. say it sucks. but look at my other work and comment on THAT please.
| Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by dublhelix | [ Reply to This ]
  I TOTALY AGREE WITH INVISIBLETEARS!!! AND SECRETDREAM.. this is a rant you dont need to put other ppl beliefs down.. if you dont think there is a god, then dont think that. but for those who do we are entitled to feel the way we feel we arent forcing you to believe so you need to learn to keep your mouth shut at the right times...oh and feel free to bash me if you would like its not like it would bother me
RandiKae
| Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by RandiKae | [ Reply to This ]
  I think your vent-rant-poem is great. Some thing that isn't stated publicly enough, the blood thirdty one is a huge moratl blunder. Oh and "invisibletears" I think you should read the bible beacuse god hates us more than we hate him. If you keep ranting I'll keep reading.
| Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by vvv | [ Reply to This ]
  OBVIOUSLY this isnt a poem people...its a rant...

PLEASE stop sayin its a poem.

oh and im an atheist. it doesnt MATTER what i think about god. its not MY god
| Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by dublhelix | [ Reply to This ]
  listen i'm not religious or sh*t but that was uncalled for. you shouldn't diss other ppl for what they believe in. maybe ppl do fight over religion but at least they believe in something and are willing to fight for it. besides your poem really wasn't a poem...it really was more of a rant.
| Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by secretdream0 | [ Reply to This ]
  Ok i'm NOT TRYING TO BE RUDE OR ANYTHING BUT HONESTLY i THINK YOUR POEM IS PATHETIC. iT IS JUST VENTING. iT DOESN'T HAVE MOOD, FEELING, OR MEANING. and I disagree, if there is no god then where do u think people came from. I think organizing your poems into stanzas and making it longer, would help. Just because it ended out of no where. Sorry to sound so harsh., but thats what I think .Keep writting!
| Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by invisibletears | [ Reply to This ]

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