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    dots Submission Name: What is a friend?dots
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    Author: grinninggashes
    ASL Info:    17/f/from sumwhere :)
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 154/124/25
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 906
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 446



    Description:
       I think that this needs more... eventually ill add more to it


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    dotsWhat is a friend?dots
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    A friend is always honest
    A friend doesn't lie
    A friend is there for you when you feel the need to cry

    A friend offers to help you when your in need
    A friend is always loyal
    A friend is there when your life is in termoil

    A friend doesn't break a promise
    A friend is usually there and when shes not you miss her
    A friend is someone that you can easily call a sister




    Submitted on 2005-02-07 10:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I want a friend lyke that. Was thys in protest of a badd friend or honor of a good one? In either case- that could be what you add to it, the opposite... Peace, love and plasma- ~#6-
    | Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes you copuld expand on this poem, but I would like to see you write this in a less obvious way. Your meaning and views are great.
    | Posted on 2005-02-07 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      I think thiese were great descriptions of a freind. I love all my friends, and i think almost all fit your defintion of a freind. I would change only on thing. You said you can call a friend a ssiter that is true, but there are also guy friends that you can call a brother.Other than that it is great. I think this one is going in my favorites.
    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]


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