For you I would lay
in the deepest sea.
Release my body
let waves cover me.
Ride lighting
to guide your way.
Roll with thunder
to silence your day.
Run bafefoot through the jungle
getting lost in the breeze.
Alive only with your essence
to tantalize and please.
Walk upon burning coals
and kneel at your feet.
Cross a smoldering dessert
bringing water in the heat.
Climb the highest mountain,
bearing flesh and all.
Come down in the landslide
with no fear to fall.
All of this I would do,
if you could be with me.
I fantasize but live with reality.
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Submission Name: What I Would Do
I hate that longing. You work up the disappointing climax/ending so well... I think this piece is meant to be read aloud. I can see it done as a monologue or Oral Interpretation piece. Getting more and more excited and frantic as the piece goes along, falling deeper and deeper into the fantasy... and then fading back and realizing what you're really waking up to. You improve every time you post... really good. 