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    dots Submission Name: breath of lifedots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsbreath of lifedots
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    All
    great and small
    share this breath
    dont defile its grace.




    Submitted on 2005-02-08 07:07:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well, this sounds like a continuation of The Breath. I think you could make a series of these or conjunct them. It's your choice though. I do think you should put in the apostrphe because sometimes that completely changes the meaning of the word (not in this one though). It's an interesting thought that all life has a responsibility to coexist peacefully.
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]


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