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    dots Submission Name: Daydots
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    Author: manda_bear
    ASL Info:    24;f; alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 57/64/22
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 333
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    Description:
       This was a poem that I had dedicated to the people who were lost in the World Trades Centers on 9/11 and the other attacks that happend that same day.


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    dotsDaydots
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    This is a day of prayer
    A day to show that we
    Truly care for those
    Who lost a loved one
    On this day those
    Who have cried we need
    To comfort them in their
    Time of tragedy
    This is a day some people
    Need to understand
    That we can help clean
    Up the rubble on the streets




    Submitted on 2005-02-08 09:43:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good heartfelt poem. I think if some of the victims of this tragedy read this, they would really appreciate it. You have a big heart, and I think it's great that you care so much for people.
    | Posted on 2007-02-03 00:00:00 | by Draigon | [ Reply to This ]
      Like i said in the last one..
    for this one time, (once again lol)
    and only this one time..
    *I accompany thee*

    -necrotic-

    PS~ I LOVE IT BY THE WAY!
    | Posted on 2005-03-22 00:00:00 | by necrotic | [ Reply to This ]
      I love this poem. It tries to say that we've got to give back to to society what we've got out of it.

    Great work! Baafuo
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by Nightrider | [ Reply to This ]
      Man do you have such a big heart and loads of comapssion, Its truly great to see a poem with such heartfelt sharing emotions that doesn't try to be fancy or wordy.

    Excellent write
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]



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