The dance sucked
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angry, venting, non-nice flowing poetry.
The dance sucked
Roses are red I am blue I'm hatting this dance I want to throttle you My date had pneumonia and they convinced me to go alone And I spent the entire night Wanting to go home And the couples pushing closer towards me I hope you f***ing die Stick your tongue a little further down his throat I hope you f***ing choke This crappy music and these crappy people are ruining my night I dressed up all pretty And felt uber seski Until I saw your hideous face Just leave me alone Let me go home Don't tell me I dance better then your grandmother, the only other woman you ever danced with Don't tell me I dance spastic, yet graceful That's an oxymoron you ass Don't tell me you're sober Don't tell me you love me I can see your through your lies 'Well this night was a total waste of make-up' |
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would you mind if i completely stole your last line? i think that might be one of the best things i've ever read. i think that way a lot. i actually use the lipstick scale (how much do i care about this night? thats how much makeup i'll wear.) anyway, thats become one of my favourite quotes. thanks for the thoughtful and mildly amusing (in an 'i feel awful for you' way) read. -jinx| | Posted on 2005-05-14 00:00:00 | by jinx | [ Reply to This ] | lemme tell you sumthin...and i only say this now because it's obviously in your past...this is freakin hilarious! seriously, the anger is overwhelming, but it's still so comedic! it's like mr. castanza on Seinfeld...he gets so angry and everything goes wrong that you just have to laugh. i'm sorry you had a bad dance, but at least a very good piece of writing came out of it ;) and that line, "'Well this night was a total waste of make-up', flippin sweet! | p.s. - poop nuggets. | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by treybur | [ Reply to This ] | Very interesting..kinda sounds like our Turnabout or Sadie Hawkins dance or whatever you call it. I've been stood up a coupla times and its made me kinda mad. | | Posted on 2005-03-12 00:00:00 | by AFireInside01 | [ Reply to This ] | im sorry your nights sucked. the last line was funny though, and i know how that goes. A word of advice, pig out on ice cream, it'll make you feel better | rain  | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ] | wow... I wish that all the dances were like that so that I would know what your talking about... I liked this piece alot it had somet really good words and stuff I felt the anger that you put in to tyhis... I like... | | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by bleedbroken | [ Reply to This ] | A total waste of hairpins and make-up as my grrrl says... Lol! Thys was funny as hel! I felt badd for laughing at you so much. Here- I’ll slap my wrist- *slaps* Ouch- Badd boi! Okay- feel better? Hmmmm- it’s still funny... Peace, love and (still laughing) ~#6- | | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ] | |
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