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    dots Submission Name: Joey Lied Againdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 1042
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    Bytes: 385



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       This is to you Joey...tell your mom I love her and happy late birthday...I don't wanna make you mad by this but it really hurt that you felt you had to lie to me...I saw Rahels journal and that told me what you didn't.


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    dotsJoey Lied Againdots
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    I am sick of all the words that you feed me
    your intentions are weak and never followed
    you tell me lovely lies
    I guess they are what I want to hear

    I loathe every breath that you take
    a breath that I would soon end if not for my love
    it's ironic and highly unfair

    that I worship you
    undeserving boy of lies




    Submitted on 2005-02-08 12:45:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i'd say dump his a$$, because if he is hurting you this way its BS, i know it'll be hard but it will bebetter than being lied to
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by lilghostyme | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this. it was a good read. it propably wasn't tooo much of a good write because you were writing about htis experience but hey. i still love it.
    love tina
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey don't let him get to you. He's not worth it. Just let him know that he hurts you when he lies to you. That's the best way to let him know that you do have feelings and he needs to know that they do get hurt and he needs to stop doing it. If I were you I would do something to make him feel like an idiot for lying to you like he did. That's just me though.
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey don't let him get to you. He's not worth it. Just let him know that he hurts you when he lies to you. That's the best way to let him know that you do have feelings and he needs to know that they do get hurt and he needs to stop doing it. If I were you I would do something to make him feel like an idiot for lying to you like he did. That's just me though.
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by manda_bear | [ Reply to This ]


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