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    dots Submission Name: Can't Imaginedots
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    Author: Munchie_1226
    ASL Info:    25/F/E.STL
    Elite Ratio:    4.49 - 1831/1834/185
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       This is something I used to feel. I finally gave up. Now I know someone who is still holding onto a person and doesn't want to give up. This is for her.


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    dotsCan't Imaginedots
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    Every time I catch your glimpse,
    All I can do is bite my lips.
    I can't express the feelilngs I have inside.
    The love still lives though my heart has died.

    Why do you insist to do me wrong?
    Why can I only relate to a sad love song?
    Why do I cry when you leave out the door?
    Why do I feel there should be so much more?

    I hold on each day for the man I once knew.
    But now I don't know which side is really you.
    Once so sweet, romantic, and full of smiles.
    Now one who pleads guilty to all of his trials.

    How do I turn this love into hate.
    I used to believe you were my soul mate.
    The one who completed me and made me whole.
    Gave me a rush I couldn't control.

    I fight my mind that tells me to leave.
    I want so badly to believe.
    That one day you'll say that you are ready.
    To be a father and husband and keep things steady.

    Deep inside I know it will never come true.
    Yet, I can't imagine life without you.





    Submitted on 2005-02-08 14:22:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Darn straight kick-ass poem. I think anytime u r in this kind of relationship,male or female run like hell,because no good can ever come from it.

    Never put all of u into anyone, let time and that person wanting to prove themselves each and everyday,until the day you or they die.

    Because what happen is, whenyou put all of u into most people, it will end up crushing you to the core. Now this doesn't mean don't open up to a person,just not all in a short time,especially on the first date,lol

    Very good poem
    | Posted on 2005-02-11 00:00:00 | by edthepoet | [ Reply to This ]
      Omg this poem totally hit home because this is how I am feeling right now with Chris only I dotn' awtn to leave him but I thought maybe if we took a break he woudltn' take me for granted anymore and yeah this is going into my favorites and you need to make a book one day :)
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]
      welllll now. I went from lmfao to crying mfao!

    you don hit straight to my heart with this one girl. I know you know what I'm going through I just wish that I had the strength. Funny how I can stand so strong and stay by his side yet turn as weak as a new born when it comes down to leaving his no good lying ass.

    *shakes her head*

    thanks though fa real.
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Like a wake up call to all men. To read that made me ensure I was doing all I can to make my love happy. I do some times forget to appreciate her in a way besides the usual, because the feeling she give me is more than normal. Thank you for posting this it is like a reminder of the reason I let my self fall in love.
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by Silver20G | [ Reply to This ]


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