[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: what is love (final draft)dots

    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 250
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 606
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1393

       this should be the final draft. hope you like it

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotswhat is love (final draft)dots

    Is there such a thing.
    Is it just a word

    There might not be a true love for every one
    but there always one hating you.

    so much hatred in this world
    no one can get along

    I still want to know what is love
    I know what love isn't
    love isn't
    when a parent
    picks her lover over
    her first son.
    All I can say I deal with a ton
    I guess Iím not your son
    why not agree and move on

    I still want to know what love is
    Is it when your girl friend wants to have sex
    or is it when some one cares about you
    and is there when you need it
    instead of that knife waiting there for me to end this.
    Then may be some one will love me.

    Is love
    When you can't wait till the next day to see them
    even if it life gets tough and you want to grab that knife.

    Maybe love is all around us
    and we don't pay attention to it.
    Yet we say no one love us.
    pity is the number diseases in this country.

    Is love
    When your friend is going out with this girl
    and you now it should be you.
    Or is that just more evidence that love doesnít exist.

    Love is unknown
    and no ones know what love is.

    Submitted on 2005-02-08 19:49:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Push written by JanePlane
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Linger written by saartha
    Summer written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    AI written by poetotoe
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Bond written by saartha
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]