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    dots Submission Name: Soldierdots
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    Author: theman
    ASL Info:    21/m/mn
    Elite Ratio:    3.52 - 496/478/149
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 630
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    Description:
       writing this for a friend his father died in the war.
    this i s the rough draft please comment . i just want it to be good for him,


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    dotsSoldierdots
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    This a soldier
    thats fight a battle
    and dies
    his family gets some money
    but that don't bring back the loved ones
    that died in a war for oil
    while we already have our own problems
    on are own soil.
    This soldier gets cold
    he runs out of breath.
    They try there best
    but now he lays thiere and rests
    His family gets some money
    but that will never bring back
    the father and the lover and the friend.




    Submitted on 2005-02-08 20:25:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow how deep im sure your friend will love it and its not are its our and its their instead of there hope this helps a bit
    | Posted on 2005-02-08 00:00:00 | by Georgia Gurl | [ Reply to This ]


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