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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: jeniecel
    Elite Ratio:    3.04 - 133/154/58
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       something for my boyfriend Jade. we fell apart but now we are together again.


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    dotsLovedots
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    Love
    Hummed in the ascending dawn
    Where inevitable light was sought and found
    Recaptivated in the serenity of the wind
    Where it was heard to be whispered again
    And love, not two but one
    Could be mislead by uncertain foes
    In the dusk after a mighty strife
    It could be sang forever with the night
    But if you think that love's cry mend
    To bleed and breath anew
    Then love's songs could patiently wait
    To be chanted, to be whistled by the wind.




    Submitted on 2005-02-08 22:02:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This whole thing had a really great flow to it. I love the way you protrayed love, and really like this. ^_^ Hope you keep up the great work!
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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