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    dots Submission Name: What's happeneddots
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    Author: lost_escape
    ASL Info:    16/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 44/60/23
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 281
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       Just got dumped.


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    dotsWhat's happeneddots
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    I smelt the morning sunrise,
    as I continued out of bed.
    I saw the indent on the pillow
    That was forgotten by your head.

    I tasted the oncoming rain,
    In a late hour of the night.
    At that moment I was sure
    There was going to be a fight.

    I feel your anger when you say,
    "It's over, let me be"
    I sit at the table, alone,
    with only my cup of tea.

    I see a blur of you
    Memories speeding past.
    I thought i knew you better.
    You said that this would last.

    I can't hear my lonely weeping
    It's been muted by my screams.
    Remember this is nothing else,
    Love's not always what it seems.






    Submitted on 2005-02-08 22:41:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It must be something in the air, maybe in the alignment of the planets, or moon phases or something. There seem to be a lot of young ladies out there tonight who are hurt, depressed, and angry! Girls, in a few years the guys that are jerks now will grow up and begin to act like men. They will hopefully be a little nicer, more honest, and ready to commit. This usually happens right about the time you girls are fed up, sick of their garbage, and ready to make them jump through hoops of fire. Then THEY'LL be here, writing poems about YOU. So try to smile, eh? What comes around goes around!
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by Vancrown | [ Reply to This ]
      I can relate, i've experience that kind of desperate moment too, yeah, love is sometimes cruel, I could almost hear the silent screaming from your heart which i also did before... but time heals all wounds, don't linger on the pain, move on... there's reason for everything that happened in the past. Very nice piece, keep on writing... inspire others
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by chatters | [ Reply to This ]



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