Description: I really don't have any ideas what the hell this is about, so please just thoughts and the answer is NO!
"ALL THE PAIN IN SODOMY" -------------------------------------------
circumcized.........
- inststutionalized.......
-then de-humanized.
-numbing me untill
-there was nothing left......
nothing original.
-De-fragmentation
of my youth.......
a castration.......
of every contemplation.
stealing my ability to choose.
-I try and cry,
I'm no longer alive....
For inside they raped me....
and took my will to survive.
-For what they did to me....
-did to to my mind...
everyday all the time.
-17436
thats my name in a place like this
-The medicine...a kiss
corrupt intervention......like piss
no more injections.....
just limp falic erections.....
-They have taken It all...
A bone dry sodomy........
How Ironic?
now they are inside of me...
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ouch..this is a touchy subject... it is a very meaningful writing tho... my heart cries out for this poor person who this happened to... i can see that it is from a first person point of view, and it is so understandable how this person doesnt want to live after being violated to such a degree that it consumes your mind and you cant think about anything else... A great writing in which your views and expressions are clearly stated...Good job. .Caleb.
This is great! I mean im not some freak obsessed with the falic or anything, but this poem has real edge. I love what you've done with the formatting, because everything sort of leans one way and then the next. It made me want to real more of your stuff which can only be good right? also what more do you want than people to want to read on? Hooked... ellisa
Submission Name: "ALL THE PAIN IN SODOMY"
