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    dots Submission Name: Rumorsdots
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    Author: No_purpose
    ASL Info:    17 | Vag. | Pallet Town
    Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 63/47/21
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 375
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    dotsRumorsdots
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    Rumors
    spread around the school
    and people are being unbearably cruel
    Rumors
    They will never stop
    I guess I'm just plain out of luck
    Rumors
    Are makeing me lose
    My friends and everything I chose
    Rumors
    Are nothing but lies
    They're twisted words and twisted crys
    Rumors
    They make me suffer
    They make me what people call a cutter
    Rumors
    Are drowning me in emotions
    They are what's making all this Commotion
    Rumors
    Are making people see
    Who I don't want to be





    Submitted on 2005-02-09 12:04:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem was pretty sweet, I think that it is a poem that all teenagers in school know about...hopefully though that you aren't a victim of this...rumors are stupidheads.Much luck in the future.
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      I think this was a good poem because almost every highschool girl goes through it and if they dont' they are lucky. In your poem you have a rhyme theme thing and in your 5th and 6th line they don't really rhyme so maybe fix that if you like or if your happy with it keep it that way
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by grinninggashes | [ Reply to This ]



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