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    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    aren't you proud at how much
    your daughter hates herself
    and life?

    don't you love how she loves
    the pain that feels like
    pleasure under the knife?

    aren't you excited at the possibilty
    that your daughter
    might hate you forever?

    don't you like how your words
    slowly kill her inside
    but make you feel clever?




    Submitted on 2005-02-09 21:37:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is really sad. the thing with parents, well most parents, is they arent trying to get pleasure from hurting you emotionally. i dont know your circumstance of course, but i think every person on the face of the earth knows how it feels to hear something from a parent that just cut to the bone. or when theyve needed their parent to just be there and stuff and they arent etc. parents however are human and do make mistakes. they might say something that they dont realize hurt you so very much.
    anyway i hope that you feel better soon and that you dont let comments from your parents or anyone else for that matter tear you down
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by SilentWhisper | [ Reply to This ]
      I loved it, i have a lot of friends who feel like this. And honestly it hit me right in the gut. I may be a guy but i can relate to so ya. thnx.
    | Posted on 2005-02-09 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]
      that describes my relationship with my mother perfectly. its like she feels good about herself when she screams at me & makes me feel worthless (not to mention she does that by saying "youre worthless") what a f*ing b**ch. i would say try not to let it bother u, but we all know that u cant choose what youre bothered by. i hate it but its true. i hope everything works out for u. That poem was really good. im adding it to my favorites :-)

    * NiKkKi *
    | Posted on 2005-03-01 00:00:00 | by Liv2LoveThePain | [ Reply to This ]


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