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    dots Submission Name: Cats On A Walldots
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    Author: elitegundam
    ASL Info:    25/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 68/90/20
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 256
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    Description:
       This is the very first poem I wrote in my new notebook (Which has 2 cat's sitting on a wall on the cover) The rhyming scheme is a bit different so let me know if it works or not.


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    dotsCats On A Walldots
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    Two cats sitting on a wall,
    tails intertwined, gazing at the sky,
    heads close together, they watch a star fall,
    turning their heads, they look at each other,
    the two cats sitting on the wall.

    An owl's hoot pierces the silence,
    a needle pulling thread, it's heard,
    weaving through the night, followed by echoes,
    in the emptiness that follows, the cat's meow,
    their voices unite under the moon's glow

    The full moon's light breaking through the black sky,
    a field of snow lies beneath the wall,
    not white, but blue, under where the cats lie,
    the glowing expanse of snow to one side,
    the other boasts a barn, stretching high.

    Two cats on a wall, watching each other,
    each one's glowing eyes focused on their partner,
    noses touching, they start to purr,
    with love in the air, they sit content,
    two cats sitting upon a wall




    Submitted on 2005-02-10 08:53:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      frilly... flouncy, bouncy, trouncy, and pouncy, but not so fun fun fun fun fun... you wrote a sentimental and incredibly gay poem based on the cover of your notebook... ummmm... congrats? ohhhh my... it's almost as if it was written in jest... the love affair of two cats... and cats being romantic with each other... it's funny! cats are whores...
    | Posted on 2005-02-11 00:00:00 | by MerryDeath | [ Reply to This ]



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