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PJ is Nakie!

Author: painofthanatos
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this is a very very cruddy cruddy poem, but i said i would write it, so i did. true i'm in a crappy mood and my head is pounding and i'm ready to throttle a very specific person, but i promised i'd write this a long while ago...and so it's written...sorry it's not better PJ.

PJ is Nakie!

I have a friend
Her name here is PJ
And I was bored
The other day
So I went to site
And got quite a fright!
It turns out her page is quite nakie!

I told her to put on some clothes
Or at least a few poems
But you can look for yourself
It's still nakie!

And so this is an ode
(Only not really because
I don't know what an ode is)
to a very nakie site

I hope you all will join me all
In my Goodwill
To clothe a poor little page
Before it gets ill

...and dies...

Submitted on 2005-02-10 10:35:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  oh, yeah, definetly cute. kinda dumb, though.
hey, you think that's bad, go see something of mine, ha!

| Posted on 2005-11-28 00:00:00 | by Avril54 | [ Reply to This ]
  lol! this was really cute, and it wasn't a "cruddy cruddy" poem. I liked it =P I'd like to see the website too! you wrote this when you were in a bad mood? amazing!
| Posted on 2005-10-08 00:00:00 | by Mia | [ Reply to This ]
  lol. this is wonderful. *claps* not bad at all. i hope PJ enjoys this. may i ask what website this would be?
great job

| Posted on 2005-02-10 00:00:00 | by Rain | [ Reply to This ]
  That's hellafunny! It's true as well! Where's the page dude? Let me know? It's nice to see a humorous piece that includes some of the elements of poetry...Now, where's the page?
| Posted on 2005-02-10 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
  ya so anyways, whats the website igzacly lol, nah its a good poem but really i wouldnt mind the website, plz tel me the persons at least cute, cuz if not then its wrong o well good job
| Posted on 2005-02-10 00:00:00 | by obsidiandreams | [ Reply to This ]
  ha ha ha... amusing as hell dear! i hope your friend finds some clothes.. or is at least cute! um, what is her website? maybe i should check this out for myself, lol! anyway, very fun poem
| Posted on 2005-02-10 00:00:00 | by prettygrnEyes | [ Reply to This ]
  ha god courtney, this was INCREDIBLE hehehe, yea PJ can be one nakie little queer sometimes, cant she? but i can say that b/c shes my twin and she'll never see this comment hahahahaha
| Posted on 2005-02-26 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ]

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