Description: Ever notice how things can be so calm on the surface but a total disaster underneath? This was inspired by looking at a friends fishtank.
The Oceans Are So Peacefull -------------------------------------------
The oceans are
so very peacefull
you could never tell
that just below
the surface
chaos is occuring.
just about to
break the waves,
and make itself known.
But at the moment
all you see
is the serenity
of the smooth
peacefull sea.
o this is nice, short and sweet. like everyone else said, wonderful metaphor about how nothing is how it seems, specially people. i have definately learned that over the years.
I conclude that this is about the tsunami in southeast asia? Am I right? It is a very good poem that tells you not to judge people or other things. I like it.
thats actually pretty cute. cuz its like the calmness you see around people even when theyre churning inside. im like that usually...but eh, i like the poem. and pooh!
Submission Name: The Oceans Are So Peacefull
