Description: okie, wrote this one while doing math homework yesterday, i gave it to my friend to turn into a song, thus some of the rhyming, cuz normally i hate to rhyme. tell me if the rhyme adds anything or not, if it makes sense, not that anything i ever do does, i dont care, whatever. and i need a better title!!!!!
the least i could do
when you fell from the skies
to shelter you under my home
watching as you sleep
breathing so deep
when will you arise
to face your demise
save yourself from me
i don't know who you are
or whatever you may be
what do you seek down here
the corruption i bleed
through the stones in my keep
soaking through your skin
unnoticing what i've done to you
awaken yourself and follow me down
to the darkness to stay with me
under my cover
you stutter your words
never knowing how you came to be
within my grasp
the mists settle, disturbing ourselves
whisk it away
so we can be at peace
in your arms
i see what you once were
a soul from above, decended to me
an entity i've stolen
the holiness i've broken
to bind your life below
I liked it. It made me think you were caring for someone, and even though you didn't know eachother, that care some how turned into love. I really like the idea of love with a stranger. It's somehow odd, yet romantic.
Keep up the good work, I hope to see more poems soon!
I like a poem that is not straight foward. It gives the readers something to think about and make up their own minds. This is one of those poems. Good write! :)
Submission Name: distant
