Description: This I wrote today. I know it's not good, but I'm at a loss for what to do, and when I get lost I just put things in places, hopeing for someone to say something that might help me. Thanks for reading. I hope you read more of my stuff later or something. Thank you all.
Thank You for It All -------------------------------------------
Thank you
For leaving me behind
For making me watch you go
For leaving me to freeze
Thank you
For being here for me
If only for a while
And only when it suits you
Thank you
For making me realize
More then ever befor
That cold is all I live for
Thank you
For delivering me
Into the icy arms
Of lost and lonely
Thank you
For living
For telling me you cared
For making me see the lies
Thank you
For making me walk behind
For putting me in my place
Thank you
For listening to me
Even if your heart wern't true
Thank you
For all the lies
You've put me through
Thank you
For making me see
I can't help but love you
Love the sarcasm. Sounds like something I would write. Kinda like, 'thanks for never being there for me, ya punk!' You should give this to the person that made you feel that way. Cuz they probly don't know the effect they had on you and your feelings and your life... that's what I would do. Let them know and maybe, just maybe, they will feel bad about it. Ya know? My suggestion would be to maybe combine a few of the stanzas. Not have so many Thanks Yous. That way it won't drag on for too looooong. The first stanza was the strongest, and my favorite.
It was nice to see someone else feels what I feel right now as well,I am getting sick of the love love love Fuk it-Anyway you forgot the "e" in before and I think you meant to writ e "even if your heart "WASN'T true instead of werent -and the next to last stanza I would wipe out completely, you see you already painted the picture with even the srtanza before alone . There is no need for it.. Either get rid of that or the one before that , one of them should be omited -Just an opinion GOOD ONE THOUGH, I really ebnjoyed it- L.t
wow. were you being a [censored] that day?? or just so fed up with [censored] that no one could stop you?? did you make your voice heard, cause you did hear. Do the people you know listen to you, cause if you said half the [censored] you say here to them, they'd listen.
fav part:
Thank you for making me see I can't help but love you
Submission Name: Thank You for It All
