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    dots Submission Name: Staydots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 252
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 637
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1530



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    dotsStaydots
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    Outside my window
    The rain is pouring down
    And I can see your face mirrored in my mind
    I have to wonder
    Is this just a dream?
    Are you thinking of me and looking through your window too?
    And I'll make a wish
    And send it out to you
    I've got all my heart, and all my love to give
    I didn't mean to make you hurt
    Or make you cry
    I still feel this love, girl
    Deep inside


    I wanna stay forever with you
    Feeling every heartbeat
    So close to mine
    I wanna stay forever with you
    Holding on to every breath
    Stay forever with you

    I remember all those endless nights
    When a look in each other's eyes
    Made everything alright
    And every kiss would go on for eternity
    A feel of your touch would take my breath away

    And I'll make a wish
    And send it out to you
    I've got all my heart, and all my love to give
    And this hurt to feel it girl
    I feel it too
    Don't wanna live my life
    Without you

    Even though we're apart, girl
    I feel close to your heart
    And now time is standing still
    Waiting for you


    I wanna stay forever
    You know it's true, I love you
    I don't think I'd be able to make it without you, girl
    Stay forever with you
    I need you now, baby





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