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    dots Submission Name: Timelessdots
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    Author: wildcatchamps
    ASL Info:    33 Las Vegas
    Elite Ratio:    5.42 - 47/57/34
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsTimelessdots
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    Baby come close, let me tell you this
    In a whisper my heart says you know it too
    Maybe we both share a secret wish
    And you're feeling my love reaching out to you

    Timeless, don't let it end no
    Now that you're right in my arms
    where you should stay
    Hold tight baby
    Timeless, don't let it fade out of sight
    Just let the moments sweep us both away
    Lifting us to where, we both agree
    This is timeless, love

    I see it all baby in your eyes
    When you look at me, you know I feel it too
    So let's sail away and meet forever baby
    Where the crystal ocean melts into the sky
    We shouldn't let the moment pass
    Making me shiver, let's make it last
    Why should we lose it?
    Don't ever let me go

    Yeah yeah yeah yeeeaah yeah
    Baby it's timeless
    Timeless
    Don't let it fade out of sight
    Just let the moments sweep us both away
    Lifting us to where we both agree this is timeless
    This is timeless, love




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