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    dots Submission Name: Tiny Beautiesdots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This is advice about how to get rid of my depression rendered poetically.


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    dotsTiny Beautiesdots
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    Small things are beautifuló
    the smell of rain,
    the hush when it ends,
    the sheen of a crowís feathers,
    dew on spider webs.
    You have to seek out joy,
    and amongst this vast ugliness,
    there are tiny beauties in this world.
    Look around yourself,
    find them one by one,
    and let the tiny bits of happiness
    explode into joy.




    Submitted on 2004-03-28 22:57:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      has the strain of
    "life is worth living, whereever you are
    deep down in a dungeon, high up on a star"
    wonderfully rendered in your poem. i think we all need reminders of it from time to time. great write cuddle.
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by Judy | [ Reply to This ]
      a really good write. i need that sometimes too. see the tiny beautiful things around me. I do what you did here often. writing a poem with 'you' and speaking to myself, not necessarily with the reader.
    | Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      thank you...i needed a smile...sometimes it is so easy to forget all of the little things....and worry too much about the big ones
    | Posted on 2004-03-28 00:00:00 | by FallenGrace | [ Reply to This ]


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