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My Armor


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 78
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i wrote this a few weeks ago. i'm in a bit of a drought right now... killing me....


My Armor



You've eased me
Like no other.
At a time
When pain broke
Over me,
Like an angry wave.
I'll never forget that.
I'll never forget you.
Once this is over
Your memory
Shall remain.
Strong. Insistent.
And beautiful.
You've been armor
Shielding me
From a bitter world.
And i'll never forget that.
I'll never forget you.
We may reach
Beyond each other,
But nonetheless-
I'll never forget
The moments
With you...
When i had
A taste-
Of perfection.




Submitted on 2004-03-29 07:34:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  whoa! im speechless....thats quite the task to achieve with me......rendered me speechless wow, all i can say is....FAV
| Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]


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