My Armor

Author: Voodoo_Lounge ASL Info:    21/F/OH Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171 Words: 78

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My Armor

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You've eased me Like no other. At a time When pain broke Over me, Like an angry wave. I'll never forget that. I'll never forget you. Once this is over Your memory Shall remain. Strong. Insistent. And beautiful. You've been armor Shielding me From a bitter world. And i'll never forget that. I'll never forget you. We may reach Beyond each other, But nonetheless- I'll never forget The moments With you... When i had A taste- Of perfection.

Submitted on 2004-03-29 07:34:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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whoa! im speechless....thats quite the task to achieve with me......rendered me speechless wow, all i can say is....FAV

| Posted on 2004-03-29 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]

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