Description: an older one about hating the constant drama in my former roommates house. every now and again, i would leave, and sit in the park for hours, just for the silence.
Silence Within The Scream -------------------------------------------
I want all this pain
But not an ounce of feeling
It screams inside my mind
But never asks for release
I just beg for silence
When it is granted it deafens
And once more, I beg for noise
And once more, I bleed within
I am again content in agony
I shall find small temporary reliefs
Within sodomy and Self-deceit
Until I can take no more
I will beg for the scream of silence
Damn...i just don't know what to say... i absolutely love it! [censored] ,i know exactly what you mean, damn i coul dhave used that on V-d, [censored] that "holiday" Wow, awesoem work, a big favortie.
This is a very good write. As I was reading it my stomach started to clench slowly. It made me feel...I don't know, it made me feel whole almost. For the few moments I was reading it, I felt like I was happy with life. It didn't have any certain form. No rhymes, no stanza's, No...Nothing. You just wrote what came to your mind, I envy that. I don't know what else to say but Keep writing. Amazing write. Thank you for sharing that with the world.
Wow. This is wonderful. I'm not sure if I know what you're talking about, but I have an idea. If it's the right idea, I'm not sure. To me it's like you're saying that without the noise and the hassels, it isn't life. It seems to neat and tidy and why live where you can't have a life? Anyway, that's what I got from it. Great job.
Submission Name: Silence Within The Scream
