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    dots Submission Name: Save Yourselfdots

    Author: omnipotent
    ASL Info:    17/F/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 82/63/23
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       This is just my take on society in general. Enjoy.

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    dotsSave Yourselfdots

    As if it could ever mean anything to me.
    Another few words mumbled under my breath are lost in a void packed full of total oblivion.
    Stuck in a head full of epiphanies, lacking subsiding proof.
    For some reason, Ive become hesitant when it comes to throwing these pieces of paper away.
    As far as I know, these are pieces of myself.
    A thought had been used over and over until it is all we see.
    And then we realize this thought has never been our own.
    We will never be the first, the unique.
    For we will always remain the average.
    Our normalcy may be questioned, but there has never been anything any simpler than the simplest form of our own equation.
    There is no division bar.
    We stand equal and pitifully unused.
    Forth comes a testament too far off our own beliefs to even be logical.
    But we accept it being the high class morons we love to watch in the mirror.
    Question just who we are.
    You will find nothing more or nothing less than which weve always hated in hypocrisy.
    Save yourself.

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