Very interesting and nice i like the way that you got the planets and stars involved in a poem about the way you need to get all of your emotional baggage off your chest good stuff
Wow, short, but very meaningful. I also prefer shorter poems if they are well written and have a good point. Mostly because I tend to lose my concentration in a poem that goes on and on. This one packs a punch and then is done. Good work!
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