Roses are red,
white and pink too,
the violet bed
is a beautiful blue.
But if I really
had to choose,
I'd pick the flowers
Cuz your roses are wilted,
like your violet bed,
in fact all around,
I wish you were dead.
| Sorry, I saw what Brown commented and had to come over and check it out. Well, this one is definitely interesting. LOL So simple (very simple) Yet so gritty! LOL|
Poor guy. With his wilted petals. LOL
Great write. Brought a smile.
|| Posted on 2005-03-14 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ] || LOL..that one was great. I really do hope you gave that to someone who deserves it. Omgoddess I'm still smiling. Great Job.|
|| Posted on 2005-02-13 00:00:00 | by Sarah Leger | [ Reply to This ] || lol well I have to say this was a great write.|
it was serious in a humours way and I was diggin on it.
I have to say though I had to lol at "Cuz your roses are wilted,
like your violet bed," because I thought of it as a guy having a limp weenie lol sorry if that offends you or others but hey at least I'm keeping it real! ;)
|| Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ] || Wait let me check the temperature on this one ... ... ... BURN! Nice job of rewriting something that seemed cliché' into a fantastic piece. If I was on the recieving end of that, I think I would die. Or never show my face. Ever.|
|| Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by Paconess1006 | [ Reply to This ] || LMAO I hope you didn't really give someone this for a Valentine, but if you did I just gotta say ...well you sure told them hu?|
This was really cute and I enjoyed reading it.
|| Posted on 2005-02-25 00:00:00 | by dr_tigger | [ Reply to This ] |