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    dots Submission Name: ***Black Mood***dots
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    Author: Wynne Devereaux
    ASL Info:    23 yrs.old/M/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 152/211/53
    Words: 160
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 938
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    Description:
       I'm pretty sure that every person has a favorite color. Now there are many of us that associate ourselves with favorite colors...in this case mine are Black, Gray, Silver and dark rich earth tones and dark rich colors in general. This poem is about the type of groove, mood I usually get in when its just me relaxing and enjoying my customary ME time. I call it my Black Mood.


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    dots***Black Mood***dots
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    I breath in incense-ladden air;
    the flavor? Egyptian Musk.
    Reclining smoothly, my atmosphere
    cast in a rich mahogany and oxblood hue.
    I'm involved in some wonderful
    'soul-exfoliation,'
    something that requires no
    interuptions or physical occupation.

    I'm sipping sweetened chamomille tea
    with one peppermint tear in the
    bottom.
    The warm liquid travels through my
    system and infuses every joint with
    relaxation.
    Its a complete summation to a great day.

    'Lady Day' finishes caressing my bones
    with the strains of:
    "Sunday Kind of Love," and "Strange Fruit."
    Now Miss Ella Fitzgerald promises
    to work her old "Black Magic" through
    mellifluous scats that riff, wax and wane
    my inner until i'm physically weak
    yet spiritually revitalized.
    The rain falls to a steady beat outside...
    completing the orchestral motiff for my
    night groove.

    Oh, how good it feels to be caught in
    my own; Black mood.

    Wynne D.
    2005




    Submitted on 2005-02-12 22:39:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can't relate that to a Black Mood, to me it seems rather the other way. I'd like to end my day so peacefully and musically. Your choice of music is pretty good. Nice to talk about and add ambiane to your words.

    Crackwalker
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by Crackwalker | [ Reply to This ]
      we also have the same choice in colors...dark-mysterious colors.
    i got really lost though in most of what u were saying. i have ADD.

    and my name is also shawn
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this poem, it is a very nice write and makes me to be able to picture you in this setting... very cool my sweet!
    This seems to be what I would find very relaxing! Luv ya Wynne!
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      It seems that we share the same choice in colors my friend. I like dark colors and colors that outline a person.

    as for the poem I really dig this...for it's beauty and choice of words. Well don again...I praise you.

    As for your black mood
    kinda like my coma black

    Peace and Harmony
    Shawn
    | Posted on 2005-02-12 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]


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